Feedback for Tiffany P.
Mockup 1
- Good:
- Nice dark purplish background with the white font
- Center alignment works well for the image since it appears to be centered
- Increased line height on mobile helps readability
- Possible Improvements:
- On mobile, try to see how the text look when flowing with the body of the person
- Play with the font type
Mockup 2
- Good:
- Like the contrast of the photo
- Mobile works great
- The image supports the chosen text and is legible
- Possible Improvements:
- Text seems awkwardly placed. It seems to be cutting off an important part of the image (swing) and could possiblly be placed on 2 lines instead of one
- Right align the name of the musical and the quote
Mockup 3
- Good:
- Text is placed in a nice spot
- Possible Improvements:
- Right align the source and quote
- Play with the fonts since you have a lot of open space at the top to have fun with the styling
- On mobile, maybe have the source and quote together instead of seperate